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Date: Tuesday, 22 August 2006 04:31 pm (UTC)
Overall, I liked it. Your Bertie is amazingly spot-on, and he's not the easiest voice to pin. Jeeves was good as well- Like others have said before me, the beginning was pure Wodehouse.

I have difficulty suspending my disbelief enough to accept that Bertie has been in love with Jeeves for ages and knows it- Bertie seems like the type who is blissfully unaware of what's going on until Jeeves kindly points it out to him, but that may be more of a personal thing. I similarly have difficulty accepting that Jeeves would do something that could be as badly misconstrued as stripping off Bertie's clothing without a prior request for permission to do so so that sir could take a swim, blah blah blah.

But still- a very creditable piece of work. Hope you write more. :)
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