So so good! This is lovely, and sweet, and hot. I've already pointed out some of my very favorite bits in my email, but I'll just say again how fantastic this is. And I said it before, but I'll say it again, I love this line:

I was struck then by the sappiest of sappy thoughts: this is what my lover looks like; this is what my lover looks like when he's happy.

Ohhhhhhh. *wibble* Playful!Jeeves is so sexy, and it's a concept I've never really seen explored before, but it works so well.

I also love the new opening section - it's wonderful!! And the last line as well - completely perfect. What an absolutely corking tale, old thing - you really must write more!